Hello William, I am Jericho from Panmure Bridge School.
I really enjoyed your post about yourself. I am also interested in the game Fortnite. The only thing I suggest is change your font colors because it is really hard to see, with the background you are using.
I Really liked how you talked about yourself in your DLO of about me. We have the same thing in common by playing fortnite which is a thing I like. The thing that that could of been changed was putting capital letters.
Hello William, I am Jericho from Panmure Bridge School.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post about yourself. I am also interested in the game Fortnite. The only thing I suggest is change your font colors because it is really hard to see, with the background you are using.
Hi Williams,
ReplyDeleteI Really liked how you talked about yourself in your DLO of about me. We have the same thing in common by playing fortnite which is a thing I like. The thing that that could of been changed was putting capital letters.
But Well Done it was well made
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ReplyDeleteSadly i dont have fortnite any more but friend me im bigboybobby101 and thanks for reminding me about the capitals
ReplyDeleteHi It's William again, sadly I dont have Fortnite anymore but when I get it you could frieind me. I'm bigboybobby101. Thanks
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