Tuesday 6 March 2018

about me

6 comments:

  1. Hello William, I am Jericho from Panmure Bridge School.

    I really enjoyed your post about yourself. I am also interested in the game Fortnite. The only thing I suggest is change your font colors because it is really hard to see, with the background you are using.

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  2. Hi Williams,

    I Really liked how you talked about yourself in your DLO of about me. We have the same thing in common by playing fortnite which is a thing I like. The thing that that could of been changed was putting capital letters.

    But Well Done it was well made

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  4. Sadly i dont have fortnite any more but friend me im bigboybobby101 and thanks for reminding me about the capitals

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  5. Hi It's William again, sadly I dont have Fortnite anymore but when I get it you could frieind me. I'm bigboybobby101. Thanks

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